Climax by Numbers
I wrote this poem for the Erotic Meet competition The Big Ohhh! to “describe an orgasm; the moment itself, in erotic or graphic detail (or both!)”. Inspiration hit at the last minute and I wrote this in around half an hour on my phone during a game of Dungeons & Dragons. I haven’t done poetry in years, but I don’t think this turned out too badly. Special Blacksilk points if you catch this poem’s secret…
The moment is here. Pressure building, explosion drawing near. Rubbing, slick, slipping, quick.
My greedy clit pulling in like a black hole, sucking.
The ache coiling up in my core.
Mouth gapes, breath fills me.
Cunt tightens.
Pulsing.
Self…
Gone.
…..
Here.
Raw…
Reborn.
And rebuilt.
Universe breathes in…
Gasping, heart beats, pussy twitches.
My moans echo in my ear, my knees weak, legs shaking.
Climax rips me apart and puts me back atom by atom, exhilarated. New.
Like this:
This is beautiful, and I totally see the “shape”!
Thank you for saying so! And yes, it’s because I made each line a certain number of syllables to match the Fibonacci sequence (first decreasing then increasing), so it came out with this lovely shape I hadn’t even really intended that is saying all sorts of things to people, which is great!
aahh, syllables!
I was counting words, darn it. I wouldnt have come up with the Fibonacci sequence though, finished da Vinci Code far too long ago to remember :)
I considered doing words, but picked syllables in the end. :)
And ha, yes, I’d forgotten the Fibonacci sequence was in that! I can barely remember any of it!
That was deliciously, arousingly, hot!
xx Dee
Thank you! :D
Really enjoyed the poem, very erotic. Hope you don’t mind me posting one and hope you like it…..
Yes, Your Majesty
I’m thirsting and eager
to please your quivering beaver
caress the furry gown
encircle your glistening crown
royal drapes spread wide apart
revealing your priceless work of art
a sight sublime, aroma divine, in heaven I dine.
Tastes to truly savour
lashings of mouth filling flavour
lips kissing lips
sipping nectary sips
from dreamy orchid flower
of addictive femanine power.
Always treasure the leisure
riding the tongue ride of pleasure
exotic, erotic, eruptions and shivers
bursting free
flowing, your honey silk rivers.